It was well done. I just didn't really like it for some reason. I absolutely dislike the song choice because its over used to the max, maybe that was why. Personal taste aside its a 9.
I'm actually surprised that this got such a low score. It was well drawn and entertaining.
Good job on the movie, Batman was always the best and why can't the guy just sit around, relax and have a coffee? Robin had it coming. Stay in school! Pow!
Well I wasn't expecting any of that and it kind of set me off a bit. Other than that it was well drawn and you've actually put a good use for sickmen instead of just having them on a white background beating the crap out of each other.
Oh and congrats of having it done in 5 days, seriously thats pretty good. I'm trying to do some flash games amongst college, playing games, playing games for college, and a girlfriend and I'm taking forever to get anything done.
"Can you look at the side of my head" was pretty funny... in a sick kind of way.
It was very well done. The music you chose fit perfectly and the story was told well. I'm not sure quite why but her blinking animation bothered me, lol, and I found some cuts to be a little too sharp for the type of mood you were portraying and the music that was playing. I personally think softer fade cuts would have done a better job. I was beginning to wonder why the character hadn't died from lack of food and water.
Very funny by the way and I know what you mean. I hate when people come and ask me for Tamagatchis ( or however they are spelt) and we NEVER have them in stock.
My only problem would be the crackling of the audio. Maybe you could edit the audio in Audition or something similar.
It was pretty funny. Story was good and the animation was well done. The only thing I didn't like was the audio and how it went all staticy when the guy was yelling. Try hard limiting the sample and tuning it up in an audio program if you have one. If you don't just try yelling softer, lol!
That was Darryl yelling at the top of his lungs baked. ^^
I told him he was too loud. I'll make sure that doesn't happen again. ;)
Thanks for review.
Try something original
I don't know. I'm torn between absolutely hating the fact that you put the two worst things (DragonBall and Stickmen) together, the fact that you didn't try to cover it up and the fact that it was "well" animated for a stickmen cartoon. I'm going to have to split it down the middle on this one.
Maybe try not to base your whole thing on DragonBall and think of your own original ideas, powerup, world, etc. This adds character and individuality to the cartoon and makes people remember it over others. I did like how you actually put some effort in the backgrounds. Not a lot of stickmen cartoons even bother with a background.
Pure Gold. That is all I have to say.
Thank you, kind sir. Cheers!
I have to say for a stop motion video there are some really nice shots and camera movement. You must have studied film once in your lifetime. Very well done, the music does a great job accompanying the piece.
I can't help myself but to review the tutorial on how to review.
This is one of the best looking and entertaining tutorials out there, great job. Loved the music, nice and energetic not to keep the reader bored, and the graphics were captivating. My only suggestions would be to spell check. I found at least one mistake. The word success was misspelled.
Other than that, very good job and well informed.
Thanks for the positive feedback! :D
I'll correct that word mate !
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